Front cover
The feed back i received from my second draft was used to create my final draft. from the feed back i found that students would rather see an image of another student as the background as it is more relatable and interesting then the buildings around Wyke. I also changed the colour scheme to suit the colours of the background image and removed the headline box to get a full view of the image. I also changed font according the the headline topic to give it another angle of diversity making the magazine more interesting and appealing. As well as this i used well known song lyrics in my headline as a pun and to add interest and draw readers in. i also changed the headline 'Money, money,money!' from a white font to a green font to make it stand out better and also because the colour green is associated with money.
Draft 2
The feedback that i received was that the background image was not as visible as it could have been, and that the bright font some what drew attention away from the image. I was also told that the font was not as legible ad it could be in red and the red and green colour scheme did not go. For my second draft i used the same layout as the first but i changed both the font from Ariel and the colour scheme to yellow, blue and white. I also changed the background and added a thumbnail image by the headlines to add interest and to give and indication of what the headline was about.
Draft one



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