Audience feed back

I received some very useful and constructive audience feed back on my 5th draft. Although the audience liked the 'world exclusive' font they thought that the font i used for 'Holly Tuner' was not in fitting with the genre of music i was representing. as well as this they said that the headline wasn't strong enough and they preferred that font i used for my mast head in my 4th and 2nd draft as it was more fitting to the genre, and gave more of the impression of rebellion and rock and roll. 

Teacher feedback

i was told that the image i had been using wasn't strong enough in clarity although the positioning was okay it would be best to take another background image. he also agreed with the comments about the mast head font above and also added that the splash should be made more legible as it is a main selling point. as well as this he said to change the colour scheme to Black, white, red, yellow or orange as these are colours associated with the genre of music i am trying to represent and because the colours have connotations that will make it easier to do so.